A Better Headline for Your Website


Hi, Reader! đź‘‹

If your website headline says any version of the following, you’re confusing your customers.

  • “(City)’s Trusted (service provided)”
  • “Your Trusted (city)(service provided)”
  • “Number One (service provided) in (city)”

Click through a dozen home services websites and you’ll run into variations of this several times.

Attorneys...same thing. Probably a lot of Accountants, too.

It's wild how many self-proclaimed "trusted" businesses there are just in your city.

You might think it’s clear (we provide a specific service in a particular city)

BUT…

If EVERYONE is saying the same thing, your customers are burning too many calories trying to figure out which company to hire.

The confusion comes in trying to understand what makes you different or a better choice.

You can still include your city and service type, but try this instead.

Put what you do in a smaller font above your headline and make it an H1 heading.

  • “Indianapolis Mold Remediation”

Then, in a larger font as an H2, use a tagline that hits directly on the problem you solve or your customer’s aspiration.

  • “We Eliminate Mold From Your Home, so you never have to worry about your family's health.”
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  • “Accidents happen. We restore your home to better than before.”
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  • “We eradicate mold so you never worry about your family’s health.”

Here is the other thing...

NO ONE believes YOU when you say that YOU are “Indianapolis’s trusted XYZ.”

Let your customer testimonials and case studies make that point. Include certifications, licenses, and awards on your website to make that case FOR YOU.

Focus on the problem your customers have and how they feel about it, rather than your authority in the space.

If you do that, you will stand out from the 15 other “trusted” providers in your area.

Remember: Looking or sounding THE SAME as your competition will never help grow your business.

Different is memorable.

Joe Garrison

Brand Strategy and Messaging Advisor
Owner |
Moonflower Marketing
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