When Your Expertise is a Curse


Hi, Reader! 👋

"WE'RE LAWYERS, NOT G*D D*MN MIDDLE SCHOOL TEACHERS!"

This was yelled at me by an attorney in my first marketing gig.

I was coaching them on writing blog content for their new website I had just built.

...it wasn't going well...

I had spent a year as a personal injury investigator in the law firm. I talked to hundreds of clients and potential clients.

I was well aware that the average education level wasn't high.

Even if it was, people don't want to read doctoral dissertations on a law firm's website when they're in pain.

At the time, I was using the Hemingway App to determine the grade level of their writing.

This attorney? Graduate-level language. Not good.

He could not understand why we needed to write on the client's level when he had a graduate degree and 40 years of legal experience.

If You Confuse, You Lose

In the StoryBrand world, we often say, "When you confuse, you lose."

This means that when people come into contact with your marketing message or content and are confused, you lose them.

They bail and find someone they can understand.

People trust what they can understand.

Often, we don't realize that we're speaking above our clients' ability to understand.

It's called the "Curse of Knowledge."

The smarter we are, the harder it is to explain what we do in the simplest of ways.

So, to help you, I've published a post on my website laying out 5 Ways to Avoid the Curse of Knowledge

This will help you understand what to look for on your website, social media, and other marketing collateral to ensure you're not falling victim to the curse.

Joe Garrison

Brand Strategy and Messaging Advisor
Owner |
Moonflower Marketing
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Confusion Kills. Clarity Thrills.

Competition for professional services firms is fierce. But the bar for marketing in your industry? It’s surprisingly low. Clunky websites. Confusing messaging. Social media that goes nowhere. Most firms are leaving clients on the table because prospects can’t figure out what they do or why it matters. Every Tuesday morning, I send brief emails that help you create a clearer message, simple strategy, and start growing your business consistently over the long term.

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